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Level 1
It's ok, nothing special. I would like to see more of a walkway for people, like they have to go over chairs to get to the actual bar, no bar would be set up like this. I also don't like the actual bar with the house tiles, it doesn't look right in Graal's perspective, there would be something else holding the back part up of the bar. I think the bar would look better if it was symmetrical too, as mostly everything else in the room is.
Rating: 5
Level 2
First thing that stands out is your cliffs. Don't just make them cut off, there are tiles to make that look cleaner. Also, you overused those dark water X's. The coast is decent though. Those tree gifs just there by Sue make no sense at all, if you want to do that then use a light effect to make it appear better. The burgers and fries appliances are terribly placed, they should be inside in my opinion, but not only that they're just jammed into the level. The grass detailing is ok, I see the swampy feel you were going for for the coastal atmosphere. And the house is simple, but I like it.
Rating: 4
Level 3
Yuck, too square. And the black around the torches must go.
Rating: 3
Level 4
Too square in my opinion. Also, house insides that are the whole levels never look good. People think bigger is better when in fact it usually looks worse. A very simple inside.
Rating: 3
Level 5
Don't use dirt path editor unless you go back and clean it up.
Rating: 3
Level 6
Grass detailing is nice. And I like the wood walls, they're tough to do without making them monotnous. The tree gifs are used nicely in this level. The house is nice but there are some tile errors, but I don't care for the bridge.
Rating: 6
Level 7
1/3 of a window looks terrible, the diagonal roofing and bottom house tiles going diagnol looks terrible. Scratch the diagnols and start over.
Rating: 2
And if these are remakes, then hopefully you didn't spend too much time remaking them.
Also, Superman, those are not bush tiles you are referring too, they are swamp tiles. |