11-24-2002, 01:50 AM
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Join Date: May 2002
Location: Canton, Ohio.
Posts: 5,526
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Originally posted by Spark910
House:
This is interesting, It may be a bit big though, bit nice usage of tiles here, although you could do something with that shadow as it doesn't fit that well, as it just stops in a line and looks weird, although in real life I suppose it would!
Grass:
This is good, but not brilliant, in front of the house it looks too much like odd random tiles just placed to fill in the spaces, maybe you should have spent more time on this.
Trees:
Trees are nice, they fit in well, but you dont really need the treetop IMG NPC at the top do you?
Lights:
Nice, maybe have some odd ones as lanters infront of the house and not just on it!
Sparks Rating: 7/10
It would be more, but the grass detail lef you down. But anyway this is an old level and you have learnt from your mistakes!
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he posted this on CB forums too, he is trying out |
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