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Old 11-17-2002, 10:10 PM
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K.. First thing.
Cons-
1.Your river is extremely thick, lower it down a bit, and increase the randomness of it.
2.Your path has the same thing in it, make it more random. It looks like you used Path Gen.
3.It's best not to use default dirt tiles. Upper left, don't do that.
4.You're grass (The ones that bring elevation ) need to be random aswell. It looks like a "Z " is the basic shape for all of them.
5. The beach Tile error in the upper right-hand Corner. Fix that.
6. Use more of this tile.
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Pros-
1.The water in your river looks pretty realistic.
2. Your houses are creative, but don't use those too much.
3. I like the way you detailed in the dirt.
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******'s Regular Rating- 6/10
******'s Harsh Rating- 4/10
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Show us the level when you're done making the corrections.
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