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Old 09-27-2002, 03:00 AM
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My Rating

It looks okay, I guess but some things could be better
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-The ground looks a little to premade, like the kitchen floor tiling isnt to amazingly kewl.
-The border that you made looks almost a little too straight and the gray tiling on the boarder could use some spicing up
-The gifs look bad
-Looks really empty

Over-all Score = 6 out of 10
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Suggestions:

I think you should really change the ground tiling (The Kitchen Tiling) It just looks too premade and too plain looking. Also the boarder needs to look more jagged and cut-loose, not like straight and even like. You should also change the gray tiling on the wall, I'd suggest using different gray tiles to give it a more 'detailed' look to it. You should probably add something to the level. Don't just make it an empty level with nothing in it but bad looking graphics x.x! Like make it a NPC shop or something really neat, something that has a purpose of being made.
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Strong Points

The level really looks nice. If you worked on the things I suggested then mmmmkay could be out of a job, and you'd be the TOP dogg around here I can see that you put alot of effort into it and it paid off BIG! Good-Job dude!
-MD
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