[Spark910]

*Too plain. Dont make the tiles on the floor so long, change lengths so there are about 10-12 different length along one line to make it looks better;

*Walls a re a bit boring, add to them to give them more of a better shape

*Fill in the blanks a bit more, too much space with little amount of tiles on the florr. This makes it look worse if there are big empty gaps.

*Yes realisticly it would be just plain planks. But we need to use our imagination when making levels real life. Eg: ponds. Real life there pretty straight but people use real life pons as all over the place with bens and curves. This is because it appeals and looks interesting to the Players, So when doing realisim, make it only half real and the rest needs to be over done to make it looks nice and appealing to the players.

Spark's Rating:4/10
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