well...it is a nice storyline but used too much! ok look mana? where have i seen that? oh wait! everywhere! on ever RPG game! (not really but alot of them) if i were you i would redo your storyline and make it original ya know? something never used before!! and the levels could use a lil help
work on them, now if you want any further help, id be happy to help, just message me on AIM at Jman9912
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