[darkriders_p2p]

first time level making?
Well a couple of things I would do it fix the errors on the path, and the whole way around doesn't have to be cliffside, make the cliff end off and make a sandy beach or something.And yes the island is very mal-shaped sorta squarish, you might want to fix that.Eliminate some of the plant things, and add more grass type tiles.You could pull a graal 2001 and add light effects to the ground to give it some edge.
Make the path twisty, and use different types of sand tiles for in the path.