[Valder]

Here's mine:

There small village in the kingdom of Dustari. The people that lived there were a simple folk, but posessed a great secret. They did well of keeping it to themselves. A woman there was pregnant and it was fortold that the baby would hold great power. Nine months went by and the woman had the child. She named the child Valder. 4 years went by and Valder grew to learn the secret of the village, Magic. His abilities from the start were imence(sp?). King Asuka learned of the village with magic. He wanted this power to himself and started to take the people of the village and torture them to find out how they got this power. Noone would tell him. If he couldn't have the power, then noone could. He let the townsfolk he kidnapped go. He had planned to destroy the village and all it's people. He came to the town with his army and began his attack. The people faught bravely. Valder's parents gave valder to a traveler from another kingdom and asked him to take Valder to safety. The townspeople faught as best they could, but did not prevail. They were slaughtered and the village destroyed. The traveler thought of Valder as his own and raised his as his own son. He taught Valder how to use the blade quite well and how to hone his skills. By the time Valder was 12 he was very skilled with his sword and learned to use his magic quite well. The traveler became very ill. Valder tried as hard as he could but the traveler eventually died. He became enraged and set out to find some way of destroying Dustari. A few years had gone by and Valder had just turned 20. He had been learning a lot from an academy he had enrolled in. He had graduated a few months earlier and set out on a journey. As he was traveling along he was attacked by 7 Zormites and faught them off as best he could but was almost killed untill a group of people showed up and scared the Zormite off. The leader of the group asked if Valder would like to join them, and he agreed. Now in Karakaze Troupe he wishes to find a way to destroy that foul kingdom and get his revenge.