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Old 01-09-2002, 06:48 AM
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Re: Destani : Second Review

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Originally posted by Psyker
I was hoping for an improvement...


- You already failed. Look at the screenshot. But, I'll still continue the review, so you know how to improve it.

- There seems to be no storyline. That's okay with me, but you better have a really good server to make up for it.

- The tiling seems pretty awkward to me. The straight/blocky flower designs don't look very pretty. The levels are okay overall... try to add some new things here and there to spice them up.

- The birds seem to be... ah... drunk? There isn't much of an improvement from last time.

- Most of the NPCs are okay.

- No grammar mistakes found! That's one for the record!

No offense intended in this review.

Destani's Status : Fail
hey look guys, I can do wut nobody else here can do and point out wuts wrong with that level!!!!

adding detail to a level isn't just making a patern of flowers and weeds and right clicking so it fills the level, you gotta add heart to it, just add flowers in random spots and stuff.
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