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Originally posted by CowgirlBebop
.. after I showed my friends they phoned the nut house and men in white suits came after me. I ran hastily away. My friends had turned on me; it looked as if I couldn't trust anyone. Was I going crazy? Or was the world against me? I ran to hide in the junkyard...
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I added a bit and proofread it. Nice reply, by th way.
Proofread:
... After I showed my friends, they phoned the nut house and men in white suits came after me. I ran hastily away. My friends had turned on me; it looked as if I couldn't trust anyone. Was I going crazy? Or was my luck running out? What use did this mysterious paper have? I ran to hide in the junkyard...