[SSRobgeta]

Originally posted by Psyker
Here is my second (sigh) review of Renegade.

- The intro is nice, however you may want to change the yellow light effects. It collides with the white font, and it kinda messes around with your eyes. :o After you walk throught he door, you magically fall into a cavern, where Scythe is. Now, I don't know how you got into the throne room into the first place, or how you'd be able to exit it. At least you have a storyline.

- The door warps are horrendous, and instantly warp you into the middle of the next room. Fix them, please.

- Classes? :o There are three classes, human, birdo, and bomy. First off, classes are boring and unoriginal. Second of all, you put bomies in. However, the birdos are pleasant but a tad buggy. In whatever direction you aim in, you always attack down.
Fix the transparency on the ghost birdo, and fix up the images they change into.

- There are many stupid mistakes, such as putting bright yellow lights () in daytime, and putting a chicken in the middle of nowhere without anything around it to support as to why it's there.

- There are few tile errors, however the level content is plain and unoriginal. Please add more detail.

- There are few NPCs to interact with.

Renegade's status : Failed

I didnm't send Renegade really to much for a Review but to see what you think. And it would help for you to explain more.