[Emera]

Getting better! Sounds ok, and doesn't seem as chaotic as the last one. Keep working with what you're doing :3 Here's some advice. Obviously you have 3 or 4 melodies playing over each other, and most of the time they clash and don't work well. Try creating a single melody to start off with, and make sure it's a regular pattern, nothing fancy just a simple melody. Slowly start to add a tune on top and then syncopate your melody if you feel it's going to work well. Don't try it all at once <3