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Old 06-13-2011, 02:27 AM
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Originally Posted by Adidas View Post
I like you're work, but it could benefit from a few minor changes.

1) The cork in the first image appears jammed inside the container. It should be poking out of the top a little bit.

2) I agree that the color of the soda might be a little too light. It looks like a thicker liquid..like chocolate milk. Also, the cap on the bottle looks obnoxiously large.

3) The top/down view of the gun just doesn't look like a gun. It looks a little too short in length; at first glance they look like over-sized bullet.

You definitely have some good quality work here, nice job.
Thanks so much and as for the cap on the coke, yeah it looks large but plastic soda bottle caps are kinda large (right?)

The cork on the potion I already knew looked jammed lol I'll fix it and post it :3
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