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Originally Posted by Fulg0reSama
Thank you for the blunt but to the point reason I didn't have to go through with him.
Pojo is 100% right on this. You definitely fixed a good amount of spelling errors but there are still grammar errors, misuse of some words, fragments and much more and like Pojo said if you can't balance your effort properly it's going to show and pretty much destroy any chance of it being worth while to anyone.
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They thought Einstein was an idiot because he sucked at school. GUESS WHOSE LAUGHING NOW?
Seriously though, just shut up. If you can't give any constructive criticism other than "You suck @ grammar/spelling" then why do you even post. This goes for all you people making me read through 2 pages of garbage.