
10-21-2010, 08:48 AM
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Extrinsical Anomaly
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Join Date: Sep 2009
Location: Ohio
Posts: 3,049
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I don't see why you're so caught up in the idea I'm trying to prove I'm smart. Get over yourself and learn to take criticism like a man instead of a baby. Coherency is very important in an essay. I don't want to take your idea down. I'm actually interested but if you want people to like it too then take my advice. |
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