03-24-2010, 04:16 AM
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Join Date: Jul 2006
Location: Cid_Highwind's Closet
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Your shading needs to be a bit cleaner, with a greater variety of colours. I don't like the outline or the shape either, but the
concept is cool. Try making the little green things more interesting. Also, Zone is kinda a dark, shiny coloured game. Keep that
in mind next time you try :]. Oh, and watch the porportions, and think about your character holding it. Is it a rifle? If so, where
do you put your hand? How does it shoot with no trigger? What does it shoot? Can it be Dual Wielded? |
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Last edited by alexrox222; 03-25-2010 at 02:50 AM..
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