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Originally Posted by alexrox222
So I've decided to try doing GFX (  ) but as you see, it didn't work out so well for me. I'd like to get some feedback for improvements please. Criticisms? Suggestions? Pointers?  ?
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IMO it looks pretty ok, like the shape. Shading is not bad.
However, it lacks one thing, you've divided the gun into several areas in your lineart, which is cool. But you all shaded them as if they were just plain round bulbs, they lack texture.