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Originally Posted by DeCeaseD
Your grays are far too gray.. try adding a hint of color to them? Maybe a blue-ish or tan-ish color would help to pop the color in the tiles. And also.. your sidewalks are far too soft and lack contrast in comparison to the other tiles. Another thing.. try adding more depth to your sidewalks and making it look more like the sidewalk/street are connected, at the moment the sidewalks look almost as if they are just resting on top of the cement, when in reality sidewalks go beneath the leveled cement top. But other than those few things, it looks like you're off to a rather good start.  |
Really great criticism, and thank you for that. I will keep that in mind as I continue my progress.
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Originally Posted by coreys
What I said about contrast and grey tones still stands  |
Alright, I'll work on it! :P
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Originally Posted by Nomad_P2P
Shadows & Detail 8)
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Okay dokey.
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Originally Posted by Deas_Voice
you forgot that piece of green in the window..
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Yeah I will add onto that later. :P
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Originally Posted by MrName
This looks pretty awesome
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Thanks!
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Originally Posted by DustyPorViva
Still got those pillowshaded cracks on the sidewalk. And like said above, don't use pure gray.
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Alright, I'll keep that in mind thanks!
Thank you everyone for criticizing, I wouldn't improve without it! So, I will be working on it this weekend, so stay tuned!
