[Crono]

As a show level that serves no purpose it looks good. A few minor errors here and there but they're not major.

Don't like the top left thing.

I don't like your beach styling though, that doesn't look very attractive. You seem to have your grass styling down, now you have to work on the beach outlines. The same happened to me, I just practiced and had a friend keep judging it until we both felt it looked alright.

p.s you forgot to add little waves in the deep water!