
05-25-2009, 12:09 AM
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Join Date: Aug 2004
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Panther, I attached another screenshot of your level where I outlined some more areas of concern. In red is a single tile error I found concerning grass-grass layering and the positioning of the nearby fence. I suggest you consider moving the layering outside (above) the fence or below it so avoid what I consider to be an error.
In yellow, I outlined areas of style concern. It is small, but when making the swamp patches, use the full patches (the original ones you used before my previous post) for the middles, and simply change the outside tiles (not the outside patches) with tiles from the swamp edging that I told you of in my last post.
In violet I outlined the patch of swamp edging that I assume you forgot to remove before taking a screen shot and posting it.
To me, this level looks like an entranceway (note the two doors and the path connecting them). I have no qualms about the "purpose" of his level. Once/if Panther takes my most recent suggestions to heart, I think his level will have been successfully completed.
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