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Old 01-15-2009, 06:22 PM
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Getting better! Though, just to be a critic:

-Try not to blob together black pixels, like in the handle...Try to exchange the black pixels inside the outline with something lighter enough to notice the difference.

-The red and yellow lines don't really work well unless you blend it into somethinga bit thicker (3 thick lines, red, orange and yellow?)

-Try to keep rounded things round? x.x; for example, number 1 is nice, number 2, is not. :o
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