01-11-2009, 03:28 AM
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Join Date: May 2004
Location: San Francisco
Posts: 10,410
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The font should probably be a bit larger - although one which is easier to read would help. Your kerning is pretty bad, they seem spaced too far apart. Try to unify the elements, right now it seems more like a bunch of stuff floating around the page. |
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