
06-20-2008, 10:05 PM
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Join Date: May 2004
Location: San Francisco
Posts: 10,410
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I feel the banner draws too much attention - you may want to tone the contrast down. However, the contrast of the banner gives your eyes excellent direction - so that they move down. Sadly, once they've moved past the banner you may find they become lost - as there is no longer any direction given; they are left to wander.
You may want to add a background for the content area - this alone may fix the distraction of the banner.
As far as graphics go - they're perfectly acceptable, however you may want something which is less geometrical on the banner - I find the lack of perspective on the tent and direction somewhat reminscent of Gustave Klimt.
e: Also, the lack of alignment on the navigational menu is somewhat tasteless from a design perspective. I feel it's also needlessly large. |
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Last edited by Stephen; 06-20-2008 at 10:28 PM..
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