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Originally Posted by anubis_wing
Better then most first attempts, and yes it does look like a hair dryer. The outline is kinda blocky, the handle is weird. The colours aren't really right, and it looks like the shooting part is a *****.
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Uhm, maybe you could suggest to him how to fix it up? Rather than saying, "Oh, this is wrong, that's wrong, I don't like this..." you could say, "I think this part needs improvement, and you can do it by doing this..." In the case that the critic can't explain how to make it better in any way due to lack of experience or creativity, then they should keep their comments away from the forums or make an attempt to comment only on what they can fix. There'll be more than one person, so whatever you don't cover, someone else will probably be able to.