[TalonShriner]

Great, basic outline, but you should try and avoid clichés like "The Dark Kingdom" and other over used Sci-Fi terms. Come up with a unique setting or central plot (and I don't mean like a RPG type plot) and pull together ideas that will branch off these points. It took me months to figure out Niromia's strategically designed mainland to fit the plot and setting of the server. In addition to drawing out the map, I spent some nights writing a 7 page "Bible" that described almost every single aspect of the server. It looks like you have a great start, but just make sure you follow through with your plans before getting ahead of yourself and being rash by buying a server unprepared.