
02-25-2007, 08:21 AM
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Join Date: Oct 2001
Location: Perth, Australia
Posts: 415
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The detail doesn't seem to flow. You need to end you grass/grass areas too.. even if they lead to no where, make 3 corners go into each other.
Just to many errors within the detailing. Nice try, but I would suggest starting again with it. Maybe add a slight path and work around that... patch some grass together, then patches of swamp, with some flowers.. 1 or 2 rocks max.. and make little groups of bushes, not just 1 here and 1 there.. seems to work better. |
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