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Old 02-23-2007, 10:30 AM
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So anyway, it looks nice and all... Few little things, (including wans suggestion on the stairs)... Circled some errors in red. These are common, and sometimes hard to avoid when you run out of room. But you could of avoided about 80% of them in this level.

In blue is that cliff, I suggest moving it away from the water, either direction would be fine... It looks odd, and throws the whole perception of the elevation off. Actually, just try to make it go north, edit the water if you need room. Even if it moved SW, it would still look like the house is supposed to be on a hill, and slanted backwards... lolAlso, the house. It should be elevated, at least one tile taller, to increase the distance from the bottom window sill(?) to the bottom of the house on the left side of the door. It looks odd, and I pointed it out with yellow font.

I know you are just starting again DV, it's been awhile, but I always liked your style.
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