02-12-2007, 04:55 PM
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Magnificent Bastard
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Join Date: Dec 2004
Location: Bermuda Triangle
Posts: 6,790
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The shading needs to be done a little better. On the second copy, I can see that one side is light and the other is dark. (Half and half) It would be a better idea to take a lighten / darken tool and apply highlights and shadows where appropriate to get elements of your drawing to stand out more. (Like along the metal edges and so forth.) |
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