I think the right one has got a lot of potential.
The outline needs to be cleaned up a bit, and you need to add some AA'ing to it as well, but you got the basic shape down.
Maybe try to add the keyboard as well, and some hole in the front, like the grid of the speakers
I'm not much of a fan of the left one, but I guess it would be better for an on screen image in Graal, since its that much smaller.
Edit: Oh, and get rid of the gradient fill :<