[Munkey]

first off, FIX THE ERRORS IN THE WALLS!!! second, try and make the floor have more detail. 3rd, look through the pics1.png for some tiles that would make a good chimney. 4th, you can't craft stuff on a wooden table. 5, Try not to use prefefined objects. 6 DETAIL, DETAIL, DETAIL. 7, post it again so we can critisize more. *to help you see what's wrong with it so it can be fixed.*

BTW i'm not trying to be mean, i'm trying to show you what needs fixed.