[Tom]

Your most defernately my most favourite artist out at the moment, and you have some serious potential to be even better than you are now.

What you got here is really nice, the original lines are awesome, parts of the colours are perfect. But if you dont mind me helping out by giving a few pointers ^_^

On the original drawing you have nearly all the anatomy figured out, but on the coloured version you seem to have lost the shape of the man and its turned a little flat.

Some parts, to a fashion, you have sort of done fancy buttonising, light at the top, dark at the bottom, and it appears flat.

For now id say have another brighter colour and another darker and start touching up on the anatomy, give him more form.