04-24-2006, 11:51 PM
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N-Pulse Assistant Manager
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Join Date: Mar 2005
Posts: 2,180
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Try not to use gradient style shading like that, your ownage sword looks more like an odd shaped bat.
Other than that, looks pretty good for a beginner. Observe what you see in real life, and try to implement that on your shading style. If you don't already, try to get a fairly good understanding of art, that always helps alot. |
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*SlikRick: so should I even ask about your aim status?
*Xor: well if you want to
*Xor: but i am LARPING
*SlikRick: While on a computer?
*Xor: yes
*Xor: in my living room
*SlikRick: ahh
*Xor: i have a fort setup to hide from beasts
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