
01-03-2006, 10:45 PM
|
|
Foxy
|
 |
Join Date: May 2001
Location: New York State
Posts: 2,831
|
|
|
Well, I'm guessing the white dots on the edges of the planks are supposed to be nails, but they stand out way too much. It looks like you missed a spot, and just left white dots there.
The water looks better without the cyan marks as well, although there is sort of a grid-ness to it when you look at it, try getting the edges to blend together without looking as obvious?
The cliff, I like.
You said you were going to work on the roof, and that's a good idea, since right now, it's hard to tell the difference between the poles and the roof.
That's pretty much what I can see right now. |
__________________

FoxKelfonne @ DeviantART (updated: Dec 14, 2010)
Many Thanks to konidias for my avatar
Shawn Kelfonne - Aegis Mage of Dustari
|
|
|
|