Just got my scanner today my drawing skills are a tad rusty but I was mainly focusing on coloring the image so I just did a quick sketch and changed allot of details in psp 7. I guess you could crit it I know theres a few problems mainy due to the fact that I only spent 5 minutes on the actualy drawing in my sketchbook.. The thing is my forums account only works once in a blue moon so I may not be able to respond but you can add comments on graalians... cheers..
http://www.graalians.com/?page=vScreenshot&sid=74
Edit: =P actually the blue moons I was refering to have nothing to do with the GCC's limit. My forums account uses my old password which I no longer have thus I can only get on when it automatically logs me in which usually only happens 2-3 times a month.