08-21-2005, 05:17 AM
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zenkou
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Join Date: Jul 2003
Location: Sol Grotto
Posts: 689
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lol tony dont do it for me! im just offering my advice on how i would do it. you dont have to take it. everyones got their own style of doing things. but yeah thats alot better than the previous one.
to offer more critique id have to see what kind of backgrounds it would be going on. |
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