i'm a fan of simple levels.
yours just has too much going on.
It's nicely done, looks like you took a lot of time and know the tileset well, it's just not something you could go onto a playerworld and find TYPICALLY around. It just doesn't flow together too well for me, sorry.
Nice work though, I like that you know the tileset.
I'll post mine later on when i finish it.
First one I've done in like a year +.