[MoonAngel]

to say something intelligent:

Yes you do need to work on that level and 2 tips about Screenshots

Maximize Screen in the Editor to get the full level if you are in 1024*768 resoultion or higher (im in 1600*1200 and my ss are too big to upload on the forumz so stick below that)

Add the NPC

showstats;
so that you can only see the level and npcs without the stats and player

OR

showstats 1024;
to see the player and hide the stats.

as for the level, add more life to it! like, walking npcs, flowers, something!