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Old 11-25-2004, 07:51 PM
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I personally like it... you should set it so that it appears to be dark though.

The top house just seems to be kind of... like it was placed ontop of those rocks, you could fix that (maybe somehow seem like it's coming out of the rocks)

I love those torches

Make your gate seem more... fancy and wonderful. You have torches along side of a fancy red carpet to a hole in a cliff =x.

Your house in the center creates an unwanted 3d effect. The middle section wants to be the 2nd story when in fact it cant. I'd remove the borders or come up with a better idea plan. I also dont get the single window by itself opposite of the door.

Move your tree up one tile, or move it's annexed torch down one - two tiles

Also just for flavor... group some grass together. Like you have the two tile peice, so put two together in some areas. The grass tile you used can also be split into two seperate tiles which will also function as a varied grass tile
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