[Dach]

I would rather see a guide use proper techniques the whole way through. Putting commands and events outside of event blocks is just lazy and careless. I see how you're structuring it so the begining is easy to follow for everyone, but I believe some people will think that that is an acceptable format.

The overall quality of the document looks nice though. You seem to have put some real effort into it, good job. I still hate PDFs though