Serpent's Pass Level
 

I got the idea from Dusty, who made his own version of the Serpent's Pass (a narrow land bridge seen on the animated series "Avatar")...not trying to one-up you or anything :noob:

This is my version, was wondering what you guys thought of the level:

Lovely level. Great job, few mistakes nevertheless it's a good job. Keep it up!

As a show level that serves no purpose it looks good. A few minor errors here and there but they're not major.

Don't like the top left thing.

I don't like your beach styling though, that doesn't look very attractive. You seem to have your grass styling down, now you have to work on the beach outlines. The same happened to me, I just practiced and had a friend keep judging it until we both felt it looked alright.

p.s you forgot to add little waves in the deep water!

I do like the top left thing, but it's shaped weird, just move it up one or two tiles to get a better look imo.

Well yeah, because you'd be hiding the part that's wrong with it. :P

I always loved your levels Xelt, that one is totally orgasmic.
Nintendo should hire you and make more zelda games with that style, I'm sure tons of people would buy it x_x

Can someone pin point where the errors are? Are they tile errors or what? I don't see them.

very nice :)

I really like what's going on in the bottom of the screenie. I'm not a big fan of the water/dirt transition(I have always thought it was way too square), nor the cliffing(mainly the north-facing cliffs).

Very nice level, Xelt. few minor errors, but great level :)... keep up the good work