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Knightmare1 12-08-2007 08:13 AM

Ak 47
 
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this is an AK47 i worked on. i drew a box, then erased some stuff. please be as critical as you can.

Sage_Shadowbane 12-08-2007 10:10 AM

Well.. Firstly I think the clip is WAY too close to the handle. Second.. The shading. I mean its not all THAT bad.. atleast you're trying to establish a lightsource. But I think you are making your colors too close together, it also kinda seems lowly saturated and lacks in contrast. But I see you're getting better man. Keep up the good work. ^^

Crono 12-08-2007 01:28 PM

That doesn't look like an AK.

http://www.topguntours.co.uk/Resources/AK47.jpg

Knightmare1 12-08-2007 05:39 PM

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Originally Posted by Sage_Shadowbane (Post 1362700)
Well.. Firstly I think the clip is WAY too close to the handle. Second.. The shading. I mean its not all THAT bad.. atleast you're trying to establish a lightsource. But I think you are making your colors too close together, it also kinda seems lowly saturated and lacks in contrast. But I see you're getting better man. Keep up the good work. ^^

wow... the first time i have ever heard that... and especially from one of my favourite developers... cool, ty!


o and i spent some time working on the AK, and is this one good? its the first time i tryed the shading different, and i used the refrance, any better?

Crono 12-08-2007 07:56 PM

The wooden handle on the bottom is still too short.

Novo 12-08-2007 08:04 PM

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Originally Posted by Gerami (Post 1362707)

That doesn't look like an AK! An AK is much bigger.

EDIT: I'm just commenting on the relative degree of judging whether something looks like something else. His thing looked close enough to me.

Jeffyy 12-08-2007 08:37 PM

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Originally Posted by Knightmare1 (Post 1362744)
wow... the first time i have ever heard that... and especially from one of my favourite developers... cool, ty!


o and i spent some time working on the AK, and is this one good? its the first time i tryed the shading different, and i used the refrance, any better?

Its better, but your colors are very bland and the handle is little small. When your GFXing try to visualize in your head a light source coming from an angle. In this case you should probably position a light source some where on top of the gun, it gives it a nice effect and not such bland gfx.

Knightmare1 12-08-2007 08:45 PM

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Originally Posted by Jeffyy (Post 1362778)
Its better, but your colors are very bland and the handle is little small. When your GFXing try to visualize in your head a light source coming from an angle. In this case you should probably position a light source some where on top of the gun, it gives it a nice effect and not such bland gfx.

well, these pistoles are better shaded http://forums.graalonline.com/forums...ad.php?t=77861


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