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Vimerge

10-10-2007 03:51 PM

another

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another random thing I made lately

Crow	10-10-2007 03:58 PM

Again, that looks totally blurry. I think you need to change that, its not really appealing.

Tom	10-10-2007 03:59 PM

I really like that :D Your getting better ^_^ Soon you might do tidyer lines, then itll be pro

Vimerge

10-10-2007 04:35 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Crow (Post 1352093)

Again, that looks totally blurry. I think you need to change that, its not really appealing.

yeah i think so too, alot of people say my work is far too blurry
galdor and a few others gave me great advice ;)
im redoing it right now.
gonna post it when its done :)

Quote:

Originally Posted by Tom (Post 1352094)

I really like that :D Your getting better ^_^ Soon you might do tidyer lines, then itll be pro

thanks :D

Vimerge

10-10-2007 11:06 PM

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Ok, redid it.
Hope you like it

Switch

10-11-2007 02:01 AM

Much better with the new one :) I can actually make out what the main idea is.

oo_jazz_oo

10-11-2007 02:36 AM

Its nice...the tumbnail looks nicer then the image. lol
I only say that because..it looks blurred.
But, when its zoomed out to like 30% the original size, it looks nice. lol
Cause when its zoomed out that far, it looks sharper and not so blurry.

xXziroXx

10-11-2007 02:42 AM

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Originally Posted by oo_jazz_oo (Post 1352238)

Haha yeah, I noticed that too.

Thumbnail is awesome, the actual image is... not so awesome. Its not bad, but, it can be a lot better.

Crow	10-11-2007 02:47 PM

New one does look better, but it looks alot like you are not drawing with a 100 percent opacity, which you should do, really. I like your style and your ideas, they are awesome, but your work can be improved alot! Dont give up ;)

DustyPorViva

10-11-2007 02:55 PM

Problem is you're painting it like you're sketching a rough drawing. The shapes need to be much more defined and clear. Definitely looks like it's missing the touch-up stage. You should go back over it and define the shapes, and clear up the 'scribbles'.
Really like the lighting on the last one though.

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