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MrAnonymous_P2P 08-31-2007 04:18 PM

Dual Wrench
 
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Hello,

I have been playing graal for quite a long time and the first thing I ever tried in the development world was graphics, I got into it for awhile and then for about 4 years I wasn't doing any graphics. I have tried to get back into them and this is my first try at something in like 4 years.

It is a dual wrench weapon for a server I am working on, the class that will be using this is the engineer and I dont give a crap if its illogical I want advice on how to make it better.

Oh and please don't give me "It sucks."

If your going to respond atleast give some advice.

I am trying a totally new style of shading btw.

Crow 08-31-2007 04:31 PM

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Well, your "shading" is hardly noticeable, and the shading you got on the metal part of that wrench is just wrong, you shouldnt shade metal like that.
The shading looks pretty noisy. Also, its pretty dark. You have to lighten the colors, and also add some contrast. Here's my edit:

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MrAnonymous_P2P 09-01-2007 12:08 AM

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Ok I worked on my shading, I didnt really "Lighten" that much but I think I did do pretty well. More C and C please. Oh yeah btw thanks a lot crow.

PrinceOfKenshin 09-01-2007 01:09 AM

Please attach it as a .png i don't want to have to download it = )

MrAnonymous_P2P 09-01-2007 01:14 AM

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Heres for all those lazy people out there ;)

Chompy 09-01-2007 01:46 PM

Hmm, add a (dark)green background?

Crow 09-01-2007 02:16 PM

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Originally Posted by Chompy (Post 1345078)
Hmm, add a (dark)green background?

Naw, thats not a good idea ;[

Cloven 09-01-2007 04:15 PM

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Originally Posted by MrAnonymous_P2P (Post 1345003)
Heres for all those lazy people out there ;)

It's very flat looking.

MrAnonymous_P2P 09-01-2007 04:37 PM

Any idea how to fix the flatness?

Cloven 09-01-2007 05:24 PM

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Originally Posted by MrAnonymous_P2P (Post 1345108)
Any idea how to fix the flatness?

A greater deviation between your shadows and highlights should fix the problem. Your graphic is small enough that it doesn't require more than a few separate shades at most. Crow provided a decent example.

Crow 09-01-2007 10:30 PM

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Originally Posted by Cloven (Post 1345121)
A greater deviation between your shadows and highlights should fix the problem.

What he and I said. Contrast ;o

Chompy 09-01-2007 10:40 PM

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Originally Posted by Crow (Post 1345088)
Naw, thats not a good idea ;[

I meant so we could fully see it ;o

Cloven 09-02-2007 12:27 AM

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Originally Posted by Crow (Post 1345183)
What he and I said. Contrast ;o

Indeed. Maybe he didn't know what contrast meant? :D

MrAnonymous_P2P 09-02-2007 06:35 AM

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Tried to contrast a little more.Not really that noticeable but it looks a little better

Oh yeah btw I know what contrast means lol. I just didn't exaggerate as much as he did.

Crow 09-02-2007 01:36 PM

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You have 2 lightsources right now, which is not really a good idea :]

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MrAnonymous_P2P 09-02-2007 05:40 PM

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lol This wrench better be perfect by the time I'm done lol.

THe light sources were easy enough to fix.

Cloven 09-03-2007 02:15 AM

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Originally Posted by MrAnonymous_P2P (Post 1345315)
lol This wrench better be perfect by the time I'm done lol.

THe light sources were easy enough to fix.

It's too dark. Further, you need about half the shades you're currently using.

anubis_wing 09-03-2007 02:23 AM

Something that tiny, you only need like 6 colours.

MrAnonymous_P2P 09-03-2007 03:05 AM

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Ok, took away some of the colors, lightened it up a bit. I didn't lighten the wood at all because I like it the way it is.


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