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Hi everybody im the Manager/Owner of Bionic
an here are one of my levels i have for my server hope yall like it

also come check us out on our server online
thanks

Rave Platinum (Owner/Manager)http://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h2.../bionic111.png


Heres my inside level it took me about a day to do off an on but hope yall
like it
http://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h2.../bionic222.png

Those levels seem like the kind that will be fun to play. I don't know why, they look like they would bring a community. It's probably just be, but it reminds me of old graal a little.

Looking good. =]

is the outside zodiac's tileset? lol

either way it looks like a fusion of Delteria + Zodiac

Which is exactly why graal is in the state it is in now.

Anyways you should make your dirt tiles no so repetitive at least.

No its my own tileset i edited the default my grass is darker an there water is different plus zodiac has more things on there tileset an there houses are different then mine

Plopping grass on top of grass gets old after awhile. When you do detail you should not put grass blades in every spot. When you do houses you should check and make sure they are in correct perspective.

Maybe you should put those latern on the poles located on the houses.

There is a lot of stuff but its to early in the mornin.

your levels suck.

That will give you a lot of -rep Syltburk....seriously be kinder then that!

I quite agree with you!

ok, its an awesome level.

Yeah when syltburk is mean about people's work people are up his throat but Elk can be a total ***** about it and I'm the only one who complains?

I second this notion anyway, syltburk can be more constructive than that, then again he doesn't have to be. :[

NO.

I don't wanna lie to the guy, somebody gotta tell him that his server will never make it with those levels.

I know its not good, but you should say atleast a little bit on how he can improve it.

Make a new level instead and try it all over.

Why are you so anti-constructive?

Rave_J, work on the path style, work on your detailing. Those are to major parts of level making that can't be ignored. Remove those silly lamps as well. :P

That's why I became visible, but didn't edit his post.
At last Rave_J can be smart over such a comment and it doesn't help him to improve.

Personally I agree, practice makes perfect. You can tell someone to do somthing 1million times but until they practice it theyll never notice it or understand it.

And I also agree with that. Why the heck would I lie to him? Just for him to realize it when the inevitable happens.

You're not the only one.
Just all of my posts get deleted ;)

Yeah, so practice detailing by improving what you already have. Practice your roads by improving what you already have. It goes on.


No one said anything about having to lie. But being an ass about it is just lame.

No crono....but if Elks a retard when im reading a post I would surely say something about that too. Its just that I haven't been here too long and...well...yeah...

It looks good, even though I'm lazy to point out some errors or any focus grabbing no-no's, I have to say you got sloppy half way down the level (bottom half), the buildings seemed ok, but then the stone paths became grotesque in my opinion. Overall it didn't look that bad, but obviously showed the maker of the level sorta lost interest maybe?