Beach level....
 

I was bored, and decided to make a level.
I haven't posted a level here in a long time....
So, here it is:

Beach Level!

Comments/Criticism?

-Jazz

Need more detail :p

wayyyyyyyyyy to much dirt

They've said it pretty well - needs more detail and there's an awful lot of plain, simple and boring dirt. I suggest reducing the amount of dirt and throwing some patches of grass in the dirt to make it a little more interesting.

Clump your grass detail together more, too - it looks far too thin when it's all spread out like that.

why do people think docks somehow slant up off the beach and up into the air?

Yeah, I don't like it much because it's straight-ish. My style is to use this much stuff... but it was designed for a river...

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The dock looks horrible and I agree that there is too much dirt and not enough grass. 2/10

There is alot of tile errors..

I marked a few but not all..
other than that.. its a fair level.. needs a little detail..

http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e1...6/untitled.jpg

I like it, I can't do any better lol

I dont really like the shape of your water and the shape of that beach itself. Seems like you spammed the same tile on large parts instead of making it unique. Needs more detail as well

I've never liked sharp dark water edging. Still, good effort.

less sand + more detail = better level

That's not an excuse to like it.

few water tile errors, other than that its decent by classic standards. It's a beach there is supposed to be a lot of sand...