Mecha?
 

Made some lines for some sort of Mecha.

Thats pretty cool Raelyn, would love to see the colored version of it.

agree

looks good=)

I don't like it :x

That's neat dude, cant wait to see the coloured version mainly.

That's cuz your WHACK :mad:

The legs look a bit distended for that perspective. It makes the legs look flat and the rest of it look multi-dimensional. Either shorten the length or create knee joints, which seem to be needed anyway.

me too :S

It is neat, but I agree that a knee joint of some sort would do it wonders.

hm its really small but a good outline well besides the knees.

Weak in my mind, but I don't have a good reason why.

The legs and feet look strange. I think the feet look a bit too big or spread out ? And the legs seem to break from the perspective somehow. I like it though, pretty cool.

The legs are inverted, like the Zentraedi Officer Pod from Robotech, and from this angle, those joints would be hidden by the mech itself. Although I will try and find a way to make it look less flat.

ahh, robotech...lol

I've updated the lineart, tell me if this looks any better.

The top looks great but the legs seem to rigid and the feet look a little strange, almost like a frog's feet. I think if the feet were a little straighter they might look better, but they might look fine with some colorization.

the feet look strange because they aren't a primary shape, for most mechs in this kind of art should have a more primary shape to almost all aspects, I suggest something like a plateau'd cone.

http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a2...ateaudcone.png

except to fit the actual line art.

Nice, the guns look ace.

I think the feet look odd at the moment because of the outlines, but when hes coloured them they should make more sense.

Also, the anteners loose the whole, "big powerful stomping machine" feel.

Is this going to be used for graal? Because if it is that leg ganis going to be impossible.

Maybe possible, maybe not.

But I got bored, so I added a gray like colour;

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I've darkened where joints need to be, regardless of whether it's reverse-joint or not. Currently, it looks as though it were on stilts. Also, the hip-thigh rotary joints could be more clearly defined.

If you did make a gani it would look kinda like UN's stilt gani,like crap XD

That is exactly what I was thinkin of, changing the feet to something like that would make the mech look much nicer.

could have added more detail to the peg feet or w/e.

Modified the rotary joints, as well as reverse-knee joints, and took the liberty of adding on shin plates to guard the support of the legs from the front, as well as to more fimly keep the legs from breaking due to the mech being severely topheavy.

i dont much like the ****pit

That was another thing that I sort of found weird. It's not a bad shape per se, but there's something really awkward about it.

It looks like a TV from behind?

LOL, a Plasma TV with two big subwoofers, and no need for a table too
put it on, and with the remove control you can move it around :p