Ok I know this isn't great but....
 

Ok I know this isn't great but can I have some suggestions on how to make this better?

Post screenshots. Use ALT+1/ALT+2 for screenshots and upload them. Makes it a lot easier for us.

As said, press ALT + 1 when you're in playmode to create a full level screenshot. Most of us don't like having to download the .nw file then opening it with level edtiro.

Also ALT + 2 creates a screenshot of what YOU see, but ALT + 1 does a full level, which is always more appropiate here on the forums. :)

That's pretty rad. Those levels are already so rad I can't think of any way to possibly make them any more rad than they already are. Nice work in creating some rad levels.

IM really bad at picking up on sarcasm so tell me what your implying!:p

I am planning on adding it to be wider and much much longer. hope you guys like it enjoy!

theres a lil part in the top you can't see but its mostly trees and dead bushies :)

You have much to learn young one.

I recommend putting the grass in the end, since it's like 16x16 or something like that. Your "cliffs" (i call them cliffs lol) have tile errors when connecting. It's hard, I tried to fix the ones in arctic's tileset but can't remember how far I got to that. :(

Grass in the end isn't that what it is?? Tell me oh great one.
the diagonal ones or all of them? How can I fix it?

They're a bit too plain and rigid. Try adding some curves to the cliffs, but don't overdo it. A few more bushes and trees would probably be nice as well. I don't know much about the Zone tileset and its capabilities but more detail would definetly be nice.

If you look at the grass, there is a lot of tile errors in it.

aka they suck...

there are like 20 gigantic lines of errors....

the grass and cliffs? Yah I just copied and pasted. Is there anything wrong with that. I did that with almost everything. How can I fix the tile errors?

Alright well, im also making levels to try and help out zone. Thing is when i press alt+1 it saves the picture but the tileset is saved as nothing. its weird.

It should be fine. If all fails use alt + 2

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Its bin a while since i LATed so i wouldnt excpect something amazing yet. Took me about an hour and half after i storyboarded a few ideas of what the map would consist of.

So far i was thinking, Team DM, same classes as DM, Each team has there own bunker, bla bla bla. Ile say more about it if its liked, if its not ile scrap it and start again.

theres an awful lots of dree's otherwise I like that? Oh and is the backround right with the grass? Can you also post the actual file so I can play with it?

Theres sposed to be alot of tree its sposed to be inside a forest :P And no coz i dunno how :P

click on add attachments and find it on your computer then let it upload it. A forest doesn't have to have that many trees.

Sorry, got a little distracted. This is probly, around half of the map. Obvously its only a prototype. Its got 1 teams bunker and about half of the terrain. The match would consist of 2 teams, oh ya, and no Jetpack or Mortars on this map. Jetpacks would be too easy to just fly across battle and mortars would easaly lame inside of the bunkers so that no one could enter

I Created the inside of the bunker and took out some of the trees as you suggested. Theres alot of trees still there however. But i think myself that its a sufficient ammount, if i had less it would unbalence the theme

I only looked at one and ugh.

Sometimes people have problems with viewing. Erm, something to do with the Offlinetileset thing. Post the Zonetileset thing into there and should work. Comments?

i think hes refering ot the pics. You don't know how to make bases and their insides with the correct border.

Who said i wanted to make them the same? Everything doesn't have to look the same u know -.-

....cant really make anything bad with zones tiles.

Obvously u havnt seen Nannys work xD J.k.. U can tho, Lating isnt epecially easy, and its not very hard either -.-.. Just requires pacience, and a good vision.

hey!!! I like making maps its cheap entertainment for those of us that can play zone for 5 hours straight when there are 4 people on :D