New Player Bodies
 

Ok, so i was hired for playerworld 19, and was asked to make some dbz like bodies, so i've finished the front views...i just need to no what to fix/improve on b4 i finish it, thnx :D

Torso is flat-looking.

got a suggestion to make it look... not so flat? XD

You gave quite a few colours, but they are'nt different enough, as in, ones not much lighter than the other for such a small image.

Maybe add a tiny bit more contrast, and when adding creases, make sure you get them right, or they will totally mess up ^_^

I hate how when you guys make new bodies you not only got for a body which is in shape, but a hulking mass of 100% man.

A little freaky to me ;)

Looks like he's got artheritis.

Testosterone for the win.

P.S, Fat guys come on here to play toned hulks. Not the other way round.

i'm actually pretty built myself(i'll post my myspace in my sig ;)), but anyway i leaened to draw from dbz...so i'm kinda stuck with that style...:\ but i'll add more contrast, and codein how does it look like he has artheritis?

Do you normally clamp your fingers tightly when you walk around?

It looks decent, but it's really similar to pretty much every other graal body out there. Good if you want it to mix in with other types, but with the way the gani system works, there's no reason to stick with the same proportions and size.

Personally, I'd love to see bodies done in the style of the Seiken Densetsu games, where they're large, colorful, and animated, instead of sticking with the same conventions all the time.

I don't like the way his arms bend in. I think you should change the shape of that a bit.

Also, his...pecs? the shadow looks triangular too much. I think the line should be more like:

_/

rather than completely diagonal.

I dont much like them... they seem kind of distorted... what I would do is maybe totally restart, usually the second time is better.

I like them

So much so that you used it for your avatar, hmm? Well...to each his own.

I don't like the arms...they look....rubbery or something

For their purpose, I like them.

I dont like the eyes for some odd reason. :( the rest looks cool though

It looks nice, good luck animating it. :]