rate my level
 

first level in a few months, rate plz, i need some feedback.,

http://img280.imageshack.us/img280/5...evel5ie.th.png

There's nothing there, please attach the screenshot.

sorry about that, my comp was going too slow with uploading, so i edited my post and put the link in.

its pretty nice, grass is plain in spots, and then has too much of those small spots in areas if you spread it out a bit, and added the taller tuffs of grass, this would be a pretty nice level :)

A normal level, it's okay. I just don't like the windows of that big house.

heres a updated one

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For one, you shouldn't use the sand path generator. You should use normal tiles.

Two, you need to put a bit more tall grass down, and in clumps. Take away alot of that cut swamp, it only works when it's in minute amounts.

Also, try and join your trees together.

The windos should be the same color, i think, plus, don't spam the cut swamp parts in, put individual parts in, more of the tuffs of tall grass than the swamp. Path does look a little strange, but its not bad

Not one thing on that level is of good quality I believe. Unless I overlooked somthing rofl. But yea that stone path you need to learn how to do those correctly for sure.
I advise doing a level tutorial, which I believe are stickied in this leveling section.

If you try hard who knows maybe youll be rlly rlly good one day. ^^

No offense really, make another attempt with a complete new level

It's not too bad, but I don't like the random pathway.

i did not say to degrade my level, i said tips, not "create the whole level", infernix you tkae levels way too seriously, concentrate on your social status
,i havent seen one good level of yours so shutup. codein wats the difference of using them, and i didnt use sand path smart one if u look at it closely, and why wud you not use the generator, for one its easy and for 2 it resembles the same thing even if u do it tile by tile, you need to use your head. I know i overdid the half swamp tho.

Okay tips: Add something creative to the level, eye candy. It looked boring to my eyes, look at how some of the posters have done with the layout of there levels, search and you will find some levels which have nice layouts, look at it and try to look at the same perspective creating something different, if it doesn't work out try again with something different, or even easier.
Original house would be nice, maybe cover the level with trees, just to fill the level out because it looks really green with the same tiling over and over again, 70% of the level is like that, same tiling over and over again.
The path looks boring , have a variety of which ways its going then having it straight all the time.

Overall you don't have any layout, which is probably the reason why people do not like the level. As infernix said, look up some tutorials, learn from what people are saying and take it like I did when I started posting my levels.
The more levels you make, the better you get.

Rating: 2/10

i already seen the level tutorials way long ago, and trust me, i got tremendously better than i used to be a few months ago. I think your saying just to be creative on the level layout.

I agree but only 1.5/10 though...

Is Jaffer still using this account?

question though skytburk, why did u give me a 2/10 when you gave some plain pk level a 3/10.

Yes I concentrate of my social status how? You speak as if you know me because I sure dont know who you are at all. Now I didnt even give your level a true rateing out of 10. But other did and they still obviously gave you a horrible rateing. Now are you mad because I told you to use a tutorial because obviously Im not the only one who agrees that you need a lot of work. O if you wanna see my levels somtimes lol just click my name and look for a thread or two I might have posted smartass.

Now I will rate your level, Your Stone Path needs work, you should use the sand path generator,your house needw rok because you shouldnt use barrells or baskets like that for sure. What else... your grass detailing needs a lot of work. But let me stop concentrateing on my social status by gradeing your level bad..no clue how that helps my social status. GJ RE-RE YOU FAILED TRY AGAIN.

yes he is

for one i can tell that your social staus is low taking the rating to the next level, for 2, alot of houses have barrels from what other people make and so with levels have barrels on the walls. oo you feel stupid.

edit: i looked at your levels and heres what i thought. Every level is messy as hell. Cliff errors, also messy pathways and messy waters. You only showed like 3 levels so i dont know why you think your the best.

One I never said I was the best, Two I dont rlly have many errors in my level and Im sure if you attempted anything I did you would fail because you cant do cliffs I bet. 3rd A lot of houses do have barrels but only pieces of them. 4th you shouldnt copy everything you see because it could be wrong. 5th My Levels>Your Levels. Your levels are only fit from some noobie UC server. My levels actually have alittle quality to them. GG You Failed 2x try again.

"oo you feel stupid" goes right back to you.

Well the truth is, that in y mind he probably thinks the level are great because he really got no experience :P, mate dont think you will get credit with those levels... learn to take it

The level isn't bad, but the barrels are misplaced on the houses, the different colored windows look a little odd, the path is too big, the bush tiles on the house look odd.
With some work, and proper placement of tiles, the level will be better.

one i attempted cliffs and they didnt have much errors like yours but they were not full complete levels. two i didnt say i was copying them, i put them there myself and saw other levels had it as well third your levels look like anybodys elses. I think you feel a little stupid again. sklyburk or whatever his *** name is is a little mad that i gave a bad remark on his little water tiling. Your level wasnt supreme and your walkway wasnt that good either. I never said i was good, i havent made a level since school started, you feel just as stupid as infernix is feeling. Thanks for the tips darlene, at least she can give tips in an encouraging way.

Look if you dont know whats bad about your levels first youll never be able to make them better. No one is trying to make you cry like you are now. And yea my levels do look like everyone elses. lol and btw my cliff levels surely do not have a lot of errors. you were probobly looking in threads I posted in and not started. Stop being so ignorant and except that fact that your not perfect alright. Or you can continue to act like my lil 8 year old sister and whine that someone is saying somthing you dont want to hear.

Im not even crying stupid. I told you you had no friends since you took rating to the next level like it was serious and you still are. Your not perfect either so dont be telling anyone they aren't

Well mate I really posted the tips to you, you didn't take them to you.. you are obviously pissed of since you have to call me names, I don't really care what you think, I suppose it is bad..
Im feeling really stupid now, the fact is that way better level makers gave more posetive comments than you actually did, irony.

Settle down children a'fore I get my meter stick out.

your not good though, your levels are modern like everyone elses, owned.

Don't post if you can't take criticism

He's far better than you, and his levels are what?! They're fine. They're standard.
Your levels are not very nice. I've already explained what needs done.

I did not say he was better than me. And who the **** are you go somewhere else. And no **** hed probably be better than me, i barely make levels. Plus his levels are not very good. You and him are really being ignorant right now, you cant even comprehend what im saying. And i can take his criticism but he just bashed me out of the ordinary because i dissed on his water tiling. Wow dawg quit taking level making so seriously and be more social, graal leveling wont get you anywhere in life, its just a hobby to do online.

Can a mod close this please? They will just bash out of anger and just deny doing it even though i know so.

I will close it, but don't post another level until you learn to take criticism (Good or bad) without getting mad and arguing with everyone.