My idea better looking thanks too advice. Also bigger...
 

Most playerworlds made by people today consist of islands that are surrounded by massive amounts of water. My idea, is to stray from the typical norm and instead surround the outer rings of my overworld with mountains. Also, instead of making my entire OW mainly grass-based, I plan on making it more dirt-based.

Its going to have territory for sale where they sell for allot of gralets. Also will have to use water too heal you no potion. Buy weapons and buying armor would be a main thing since leveling wont do that much. Your starting stats are HP 100 DP 0 AP 5 SKILL 2 SPEED 1.
Each level Increases HP by 10 and you get too choose were a level point goes. Max level 5. Leveling will be hard. I want too make lots of weapons. LOTS. There will be three party's and if your level 5 you can choose to be a loner. All party's are enemies too the other party's. You equip anything until you join a party and you also cant die until you do.
When you do die you get a chance in a smaller yet harder world if you get enough money you can pay your way back too life if you die there you lose everything.

In the day there where be two bosses in some part of the world they will require a lot of team work to kill them. At 6:30 PM to 6:00 AM (US & Canada pacific time) it will be night and will be harder much harder. The people in the second chance world will die if they do not escape before then…

It will be called Treacherous.

Great.

Let me give you some friendly advice.

While it may not be a must, people are much more likely to take you seriously if you organize your ideas and say them in a professional, grammatically correct way. Let me show you an example. If you were to read two posts about someone who has a new idea, which of the two would you be more interested in?

Yours:
Or Mine:
Okay, I would have continued, but I'm not exactly sure what you were trying to say. That's another things. Organize and state your ideas in clear ways so that everyone will understand what you are trying to say. Things that you think in your head don't always come off that way when you type them out.

After you've typed up a big idea, read it back over and see if it makes sense to you.

I'm sorry if it seems that I was being a little harsh, it's just that I realize that you are going to get no serious offers/opinions from this, so I decided to help as much as I could.

lol.

Thats my down side... :frown:
I'm terible at posting...
OK Can i just take most of yours?

Yeah, sure. Just make an effort to capitalize everything that should be, and run everything through spell-check. Don't type like you are on the internet. :(

Do you usually start a new paragraph with the word "Also"? 0.o

No, and I realized it as soon as I did it, considering it still pertained to the above paragraph, but I figured he wouldn't care. Damn you.

there updated... happy? Please respond..

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I tried.

tried what?